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Bartholomew's Transparency Trouble

LLaura
Middle School
Fiction
EN
3 min read
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Bartholomew's Transparency Trouble

Bartholomew was, without a doubt, a ghost. He lived in the old Willow Creek Manor, a place rumored to be haunted for centuries. The only problem? Bartholomew couldn't quite master the art of being a proper ghost.

Most ghosts could control their visibility. One moment they're there, chilling guests with their spectral form; the next, they're gone, vanished into thin air. Bartholomew, however, was permanently visible. He couldn't fade, couldn't shimmer, couldn't even slightly alter his ghostly glow. He was always there, a see-through specter floating about.

"It's quite frustrating," he'd often lament to Mr. Whiskers, the manor's resident (and very plump) tabby cat. Mr. Whiskers, of course, couldn't understand a word, but he was a good listener, or at least a good napper in Bartholomew's general vicinity.

Bartholomew tried everything. He meditated in the dusty attic, attempting to find his inner 'off' switch. He practiced in front of the antique mirrors, whispering incantations he'd overheard from a group of paranormal investigators (who quickly left the manor after spotting him). He even tried wearing darker sheets, hoping to absorb the light, but nothing worked. He was, to put it simply, stuck being perpetually visible.

One day, a new family moved into Willow Creek Manor. They were the Millers: a mom, a dad, and a daughter named Lily. Lily was a curious girl with bright eyes and an adventurous spirit. She immediately heard the rumors about the manor being haunted. Unlike the other children in town, Lily wasn't scared. She was intrigued.

On her first night, Lily saw him. There, floating in the hallway, was Bartholomew, as clear as a pane of glass. Lily didn't scream. She didn't run. She simply said, "Hello."

Bartholomew was shocked. People usually shrieked, fainted, or, at the very least, awkwardly avoided eye contact. He stammered, "H-Hello. I am Bartholomew, the… resident ghost."

Lily giggled. "I'm Lily. It's nice to meet you, Bartholomew. Why are you always glowing?"

Bartholomew explained his transparency trouble. To his surprise, Lily didn't find it scary or weird. She found it fascinating. Lily suggested using his glow to their advantage. She needed a nightlight!

From that day on, Bartholomew wasn't just a ghost with a transparency problem. He became Lily's friend and an unusual nightlight. He would float outside her room, his gentle glow chasing away the shadows. Lily even started a rumor that the Manor was protected from bad dreams by a glowing ghost. And Bartholomew? Well, he finally found a way to be seen, not as a terrifying specter, but as a friend.

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Glossary
Specter:
A visible incorporeal spirit, especially one of a terrifying nature; ghost; phantom; apparition.
Incantations:
A series of words said as a magic spell or charm.
Perpetually:
In a way that never ends or changes; constantly.
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“Bartholomew's Transparency Trouble” is a fiction reading passage about Ghost Stories, written for Middle School. It takes about 3 minutes to read (427 words) and comes with an interactive quiz and a printable worksheet with comprehension questions and an answer key.

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